Week #3 100 Word Challenge



The flight to Minnesota for the Super Bowl was cancelled and the passengers were restless trying to get seats on the next plane just in time for the second half. The richer ones abandoned the airport for yachts and "Jetted away" or went out and bought large screen T.V.'s. The lucky few who got seats had just made it at halftime, ready for what they craved to see, watching them throw and intercept, throw and score a touchdown. Thirty-seven seconds left and they're tied 80-80 the possessing team's wide receiver is open, ready and they threw a pass, but it seemed to be going backwards. Then, THE OTHER TEAM SCORED!

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  1. Hello Headintheclouds,
    I found your story entertaining, and an interesting use of the prompt. You have a strong opening sentence that grabs the reader’s attention. You have used descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'restless', 'abandoned', and 'craved', which makes your writing interesting to read. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. throw. Keep on writing and learning.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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